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SliceofToasty457
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: thelegendaryfrenchtoasty457
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: play be the rules and the physical limitations of my rp character
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It ruins the rp itself. if i go to a bar i want the shit the hobbits got, not a budlight
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Elenthor Greywolf
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Height: 6:2
Weight: 160
Eye color: Black
Hair: Moon white
Outfit: Purple and black rob with a red crystal over his chest, he wears brown boots
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example: (delete this) 

he stares at the candles, he is mesmerized by them. he speaks with ease. "My parents were warriors, they taught me everything I know of blades, I am a skilled warrior, my parents were killed by orcs, so I left home to explore middle earth. i never stay in one place too long, I am a nomad. I am always studing the world around me. So i came here, but i wont stay for long, but in the mean time..... is there anywhere i can get a drink" he smiles at the old woman.

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

 

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

- Please provide a valid Java minecraft username! You should be able to find it by going into a single player world by hitting tab or typing in chat! 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No Black eyes.

- Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

- Do keep in mind we are not on Middle Earth and we are presently on Azuras, this might help you with correcting your application. It is some of our starting locations

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- Please provide a valid Java minecraft username! You should be able to find it by going into a single player world by hitting tab or typing in chat! 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No Black eyes.

- Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

- Do keep in mind we are not on Middle Earth and we are presently on Azuras, this might help you with correcting your application. It is some of our starting locations

 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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