Jump to content

slimakiswinka

slimakiswinka

By slimakiswinka

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: slimakiswinka#8159
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Its using information gained outside of the game. As using info got on Discord sent by a friend.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It's playing as an OverPowered character or forcing powerful emotes.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

My character will think/wait a couple of seconds then she will say:

"I think adventure so far, I like travelling"

She will smile but inside she will be scared of the man.

Then she will continue walking.

 

 

Character Name: Olthrien
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: My character has light blue eyes and lightbrown hair, She is tall and quite skinny. She is 50 kg.
(If it absurd pls tell me) She's very agile.
Screenshot of Skin:
Go to applications

User Feedback

Recommended Comments

Oh_Ontario

Changed Status to Under Review

zNdX-0tyj6HxPQ-zdo0WikASlaBQCPmM4VO2kEnbnzHGy5vjFwQXKQrpQbA3CGH3XcdIedRCw73pMH6mD6u6KZK2b5wOLY0pkgHGBxpO-XmfP-LaZSyjwUVWuMazcm-ZODL9SUgD

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Character Biography did not have enough lore references. Please include at least 2 lore references and 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are? (ECT)

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.

 

 

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description (Race). Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

(you may also edit them so that they fit your description better)

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home

(please also refer to the Chart below for skin tones)

O44c0f75AiOzd8mrVvVGoQXiuUUCOTguDOrVc9yOtKz4pYaxQOA0NCbIME_2rlV6HImTREbsf0dQXhOPIRtMNIfk5t9hCn4E1yXEWgk9BcDSYuwhrfr_d-FArFZ0zagJ2zHdIwAc

 

  • Your Character Dis-Like is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's like connects with your biography!

 

  • Your Character Like is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's like connects with your biography!

(Please be sure to give reasoning/examples in your next app)

 

  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

(Please be sure to give reasoning/examples in your next App)


Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Sorry.png.825730cb7e2db1f8e6d046af14644700.png

Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

Link to comment
Share on other sites

  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    No registered users viewing this page.

×
×
  • Create New...