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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: powergaming is what i heard about an agressiv style of playing, it should be avoided because roleplay is an slow and atmosferic gameplay style, but i personly can't say much because i don't play that way
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: i never did metagaming, i just look out how its played on this server and i personly try to adapt to it
    Status: Denied

my character lifed in the vesuv with his family but when it errupted he lost everything, now he try's to find a new mountain to build his home and forge in it. 

Character Name: ikkabur te tlan
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: unquie height and light gray skin and white hair, some what like a mountain. with red eyes such as rubys and to it he would wear a grey and red outfit
Roleplay Scenario:

The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two acticase1: ons.))

case 1: my character responded in a friendly but carefull tone 
case 2: he responded slow and shy to them
Example: (delete this when you add your own)
1:it brings me in a hope to find a new home for my race
"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…

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Monty Cobra

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • It looks like your minecraft username is misspelled or not a Java account! Please provide the corrected username! You should be able to find it by going into a single player world and hitting tab or typing in chat!
  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming and Metagaming. Your response is not quite right. Please clearly define metagaming and powergaming as per the sources below, and include why they should be avoided. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a community member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

    You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences in your roleplay scenario! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Etc.
  • It looks like you left the original prompt, please make sure to put your own story down and remove the example text!
  • Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks. Example: Judy laughs. “How are you doing?” 
  • Please make sure to use actions in your roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!  When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person! Example: Judy stomps her foot on the ground. “How dare you!” she screams.
  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences in your character backstory! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Etc.
  • In your Backstory, please use a location already on the server, you can find more information on the Nations & Settlement WIKI Page. If you need help finding a place you believe your character would come from, please message me!
  • Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! Mountain dwarves don't have grey skin, white hair, or red eyes. Please refer to the Racial Hub WIKI page for more information.
  • It looks like you don’t have a skin! If you are having trouble finding one then feel free to use or take inspiration from our skin archive. → https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @m.g.archer to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Monty Cobra

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

  • Please refer to the above comment to see what needs to be changed.

 

My discord is @m.g.archer if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

 

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