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Smokie_Quartz

Smokie_Quartz

By Smokie_Quartz

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: The use of information out side of the characters life to assist the character.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: To do something that the character would be realisticly be unable to achieve
    Status: Denied

Born on the Winter Solstice into a simple shepherds family in the small farming town of Belvitz never knowing who his mother was, Tellun Quartz had dreams of seeing the world beyond the farm. At the age of 15 he was selected by the towns priest to join  a special program ordered by the king himself. For the next 4 year, against his fathers wishes, Tellun joins the program and is taught basic skills such are basic sword combat, archery and how to read and write and many other life skills. At the end of the year 4 of the students (Tellun being among those selected but never knew why he was selected) from the program were selected to join a special task force to attempt to end the war. the team boarded the famous 'Aurum's Pride', the ship was to take them to the main land, but the mighty vessel never made it. After being caught in a huge storm the ship was struck by the sky and Tellun was thrown over board only to wake up in an unknown land. 

Character Name: Tellun Quartz
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Ocean blue eyes, pale skin, dirty blond hair, with a gentle smile. wears grey cloths, animal skin around his waste and a purple stone hung by his neck
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your application has been placed on:

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-Belvitz is on the mainland. Travel by boat is very unlikely if your character was to live in Belvitz. Additionally, it does not have a king. 

-Your definitions are incorrect. Please fix these, and include an example of each.

-Why did the king specifically select your character? What makes him special from others?

-What war was your character sent to 'end?' There has, thus far, been no wars on Atlas.

 

You have 24 hours to make the above changes. 

If you require any additional assistance, feel free to send me a message or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 

 

 

Edited by Lumiin
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