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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: snippychicken22#9770
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: a character suddenly know / can do a certain thing
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: having your character do somthing that isnt appropriate for the roleplay setting ( such as a medevial pesant using a computer/internet)
    Status: Denied

hello sir i seek adventure and riches in this kingdom do you have any work i could do to help me start a new life here

Character Name: Drax
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 45
Physical Description: tall, muscular, normaly wheres metal and leather attire
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography states that your character became a Lieutenant General in the army. You must obtain this through roleplay first, so please be sure to edit this!

  •  Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [teawithsarah#0007]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message teawithsarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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