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N0MAD
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Reddit
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: i just do not use any cheats to give myself an advantage
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: it can cause arguements that are not in the roleplay
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example: (delete this) 

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…

After getting my bearings, i say "parents died while hunting, so i learned to survive in the forest, next thing i remember i black out and here i am..."


Character Name: Nomad
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 28
Physical Description: brown hair, bulk and strong, 156kg, blue eyes, 6ft 1", lumberjack style beard.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
Metagaming & Powergaming - Lord of the Craft

Your Roleplay Scenario Response is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
Almaris - Lord of the Craft
Races - Lord of the Craft
Nations & Major Charters - Lord of the Craft 

Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly!

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

 

Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message AllegoryRose.

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ Neviah#1516

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the Wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why!

 

Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message AllegoryRose

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ Neviah#1516

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the Wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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