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sootycanoe2

By sootycanoe2

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Coleleg#5911
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Gaming outside the rules and using external factors.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: acting godly and being to op
    Status: Denied

*Puts hand on head* "Just here to see my grandson and his children. I heard they're expecting another baby!"-all a rouse btw

Character Name: Kiodononapolist
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Small short ragged young man who looks 50 to 70 years older than he is with blue humid eyes and is average in wait
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help <img src=">

 

→ Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

 

→ Ensure that you provide examples of Power-gaming and Meta-gaming with your definitions!

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

 

→ You stated you didn’t understand the rules! I’d recommend reading them again, or sending me a message on which rules you are confused about so we can remedy that.

 

→ Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

 

→ Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

 

→ Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

 

→ Ensure that you are speaking in the third person when writing your roleplay scenario!

 

→ Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 


After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord cobbler#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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