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soulhoney

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: help?#4073
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Information from out of character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Is unrealistic/godly actions
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

Character Name: Soul
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Prefer not to say.
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: tan skin with vitiligo, a big brown sweater, and pants, 5'3, well built, dark brown hair, eyes always closed but they are gray also wears hearing aids
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography states that you're character uses hearing aids which is not appropriate for the time that Lord Of The Craft is set in.

  • Your height is not lore appropriate for a Halfling. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should not include any of your character's thoughts.

  • You must not control any other characters but your own in your Roleplay Scenario Response

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Luxcio#84321]  I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message Luxcio to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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