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Alton

By Alton

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Soviet Doge#0592
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using knowledge learned in real life to give your character prior knowledge
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: giving your character a unfair physical or power advantage not accurate or too experienced for the character background
    Status: Denied

i come here seeking work and a place for rest can you provide this information.

Character Name: Alton
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: skinny but strong and very agile. Fair hair, blue eyes. 156 lbs, dark rogue-like cloths including a cloak
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

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→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

→Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

→Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

→Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

→ Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of quoted dialogue and one action. 

→ Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

→Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

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After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord madythenothacked#1187. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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