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Gurifisu
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: By sticking to the boundaries of your character, race, and story arc.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Metagaming disrupts fair roleplay because it makes your character seem supernatural which could disrupt sequencing of events. It makes the storyline jumbled and make less sense.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


I thank her for the warm welcome, take a seat and start to explain my backstory.

 

I was born into poverty with not much going on for me, but my father was a low level knight who would teach me the sword from a young age. I always thought it was fun to swing the sword around and hit the training dummy as a way to pass the time. That was until my father never came back from one of his missions, which changed my perspective completely. I start noticing the flaws in my movements, and start trying to understand the way of the sword. I am no longer satisfied by simply swinging around the blade on my own, I must seek opponents and improve my skills. I then left my home, taking the rusted sword my dad had left with me as the only sign of my previous life. I now wander around looking for the next challenge.


Character Name: Gurifisu
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: White hair, beautiful, elegant, blue eyes, slightly skinny, average height
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Your application has been set to Pending for now, as we found some areas that need revising.

Don’t worry though - once your changes are made, you’ll be back on track to roleplaying with us in no time.

 

- Your Powergaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- Your Metagaming response is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- You are using a name of a character of a well known media character, please change it (Griffith / Gurifisu). If you need help here is a name generator.

https://www.fantasynamegenerators.com/

 

- Your character’s Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked.

Highlanders cannot have naturally white hair. Please look through our approved Highlander Racial Lore to see what hair colours humans can have!

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/199103-core-race-lore-humans-highlanders/

 

- Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks.

 

- When talking about your character’s actions, remember to use 3rd person. This means typing "He / him / his", "She / her / hers" or "They / them / theirs".

 

- The skin your selected is already being used on the server by another player, and also does not match the race of your character, please change it. If you can’t find a new skin, please take a look at our skin archive:

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

You have 48 hours to make these changes.

Once your changes are complete, please reach out to me on the forums @Amayonnaise. You can also click on my name here to find my profile.

 

 If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance:

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Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions, or to receive help from other players with your pending application.

 

If you need more ideas, or to research more roleplay lore, feel free to check out the Wiki:

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied. Your 48 hour editing period has passed. However, you are more than welcome to immediately reapply, just remember to edit and change everything listed below:

 

- Your Powergaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- Your Metagaming response is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- You are using a name of a character of a well known media character, please change it (Griffith / Gurifisu). If you need help here is a name generator.

https://www.fantasynamegenerators.com/

 

- Your character’s Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked.

Highlanders cannot have naturally white hair. Please look through our approved Highlander Racial Lore to see what hair colours humans can have!

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/199103-core-race-lore-humans-highlanders/

 

- Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks.

 

- When talking about your character’s actions, remember to use 3rd person. This means typing "He / him / his", "She / her / hers" or "They / them / theirs".

 

- The skin your selected is already being used on the server by another player, and also does not match the race of your character, please change it. If you can’t find a new skin, please take a look at our skin archive:

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance: 

Discord 

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub: 

New Player Hub 

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