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SpiderScooter2


SpiderScooter2
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: SpiderScooter2#4656
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Meta gaming is when a person finds out about something out of character and applies it to their real character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Power gaming is when someone does something OP and gets a side effect
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

He would say:

"Well sir, I come here to make a humble living and to be a simple farmer,"

He go around the city fining useful places and different shops and restaurants. After that he would find a place to work part time and save up money to buy a house and small piece of land. He would buy a piece of land and a house and settle down as a farmer. If he does become really successful then he would build up his own strength and buy more land. 

 


Character Name: SpiderScooter2
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: 6'5, muscular but not buff, very toned, tan, purple eyes, ginger hair, 182 pounds, wears purple robes and has a beard (like the gambler male skin)
Screenshot of Skin:



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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

- Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

 

- Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

- Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!


- Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be written from only the perspective of your own character! Do not control the actions of the man who greets them, simply respond to their first words!

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. When you are done correcting, please contact me!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Hmmm#4176]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message Josef_Rippelberg to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

- did not apply changes in time
 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Hmmm#4176]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message Josef_Rippelberg to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki

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