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By stepanobo

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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: metagaming is used for getting help if someone attacks you or if your town is getting raided. The most usual forms of metagaming can be found on Skype, Teamspeak
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: character doing something they'd realistically
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Story Of Martin

My character is Martin II.

Martin II. because his grandfather was Martin.
He grown in Little Village near to Orc kingdom. He was son of blacksmith. He´s father has trained him archery and in the fight with the sword. Martin was good strategist and he was helping to other people in village. When he was 20 some Vampires attacked village where he lived. Orcs killed all members of his family and burned the village. He had no chance to survive but some soldiers saved him in last moments. Before the attack started his father gave him symbol of his old clan . They took him and other survivors to one of city in Holy Orenian Empire. In the city he started working in city to make some gold to buy his own sword, horse and armor (On chest plate he has painted symbol of dad´s clan) to take his revenge. When he bought every think he left the city. Now he is 32 and he is known as a lonely knight.

Character Name: Martin II.
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 32
Physical Description: Lonely Knight, Christian, Blacksmith
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your application has been placed on:

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-Your definitions could both use a bit more work. Please update them to the correct definitions. You may use definitions from online sources, but make sure they are both valid for the context of LOTC, and written in your own words.

-The closest things to vampires on LOTC are Strigae. You can read up on them here. I would suggest changing vampires to Strigae in your biography.

-You'll need to make reference to the LOTC lore at least once in your biography. You can read up on it on our wiki, which is here.

-Christianity is not a thing on LOTC, although some religions take inspiration from it. You might want to check out Canonism, or The Red Faith.

-I cannot find any mention to Varith in our lore. I don't believe it exists in LOTC's universe. Please change this to a city that you may find on LOTC.

 

You have 24 hours to make the above changes.

If you need any help in doing so, feel free to send me a message or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 

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winterblessing

Your application has been:

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You failed to make the required changes in the needed amount of time. You'll need to fix these up for next time:

-Your definitions for both powergaming and metagaming could use a bit more work. Please update them to the correct definitions. You may use definitions from online sources, but make sure they are both valid for the context of LOTC, and written in your own words.

-You still mentioned Christianity in your Character Description. Please fix this for next time you apply.

 

You may reapply in three hours.

If you need any assistance, feel free to either message me or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 

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