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StergiosSpo2000
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: PC Gamer
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: is the use of information acquired out-of-character, in-character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is the carrying out of unrealistic, unfair, or godly actions
    Status: Denied

Well my good man, you see what brings me here is both adventure and wealth so i get to know more about healings. Would you like to show me around your healing materials?


Character Name: SterThe1st
Character Race: Forest Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: blue eyes blonde kind of muscular short height medium weight
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Forest_Dwarves 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

→ Your Skin does not match your physical description.

→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

→ Please fix the grammar for “Personality Traits/Quirks” as I’m having trouble understanding some of what you wrote.

→ Forest Dwarves can not have blond hair. 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. Please ensure that you use quotes when talking.

→ Your character's name does not meet LotC standards.

→ Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

https://app.grammarly.com 

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#3058, and I recommend you join the 

LotC Discord using the following invite: 

https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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