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Definitions:  Your definition for 'metagaming' is incorrect. Please research online, and rewrite it in your own words.

Backstory: Please write your backstory in a third-person perspective, as it is meant to be about your character and not the player. Almaris does not use the real life calendar, so please don't use real years like 2002 and 2009. Your backstory follows a common cliché trope, please come up with something more unique.

What does your character want to achieve? What drives them?: Your character's desires and drive shouldn't be what you as a player want to do (PvP), please make it revolve around your character's wants and wishes. Make it be based off your character's backstory.

Roleplay Scenario: Your roleplay scenario needs work as well. Treat it like a normal roleplay interaction, and keep it simple if you find it difficult. It's just a way for us to determine your roleplay quality, and make sure it meets our server's standards. In your next roleplay scenario, please include the following:

- Have your roleplay scenario be AT LEAST four sentences long.

- Include at least one dialogue surrounded by quotes.

- At least one action, where your character is doing something physical.

- Make sure your roleplay scenario doesn't have any metagaming, or powergaming in it.

- Do not include any personal thoughts into your emote. Emotes should be physical, and something that other people would be able to see/feel/hear.

- Make sure you write it out in third person.

Once the aforementioned things are changed, you'll be accepted into our server. Don't be disheartened, and don't give up - if things are too hard, feel free to reach out to me either the Forums via a PM, or contact me directly on my Discord: D A N N Y#2022.

Best of luck, I hope to see you on the server soon.

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

• Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above  ♥

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [AnonymousAlexa#1509]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message AnonymousAlexa to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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