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    Discord: widwinwind
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It trying to use animal to attack and not on my own so im like a dark mage and instead of actually actually attacking iwould use potion and etc
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I would use it as information becuase some other roleplayer told me right so it like a normal dialogue?
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Thorn Ironshadow
Character Race: Cave Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Eye color red where a robe and not to tall im like a dark mage dwarf that make special armor or cursed armour
Roleplay Scenario:

Thorn Ironshadow, steps into the dimly lit tent, the flickering candlelight casting eerie shadows on the walls. The air is heavy with the scent of herbs and incense, mingling with the musty odor of damp earth. As you settle onto the cushion, the old hag’s penetrating gaze seems to sift through your very soul.

“Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you,” she says, her voice raspy yet filled with an unsettling familiarity. “Sit. Tell me your story.”

Thorn's Response
Thorn leans forward, his dark cloak pooling around him like a shadow. He takes a moment to gather his thoughts, the weight of his past pressing heavily on his shoulders.

“I am Thorn Ironshadow, once of the Ironforge clan,” he begins, his voice low and steady, but tinged with an edge of bitterness. “I was cast out for my pursuit of dark knowledge, deemed a traitor by those I once called family. They feared what they did not understand.”

He pauses, his fingers tracing the intricate patterns on his obsidian staff, the crystal atop it glowing faintly in the dim light. “In my exile, I sought power in the shadows, learning to command forces that many would shy away from. But with each spell I cast, I felt the weight of my choices—my heart grows heavy with regret.”

Thorn’s gaze hardens as he continues, “I’ve come seeking answers. A powerful artifact is rumored to lie within Ironforge, one that could either save my kin or bring about their doom. I must decide whether to reclaim my place among them or to embrace the darkness that has become my ally.”

He leans back slightly, studying the hag’s expression. “But enough about me. You said you were expecting me. What do you know of my journey? And what price must I pay for your wisdom?”

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 - How does it make the roleplay environment unfair? Please redo your metagaming question.

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is not exactly what we are looking fo

 

To aid with fixing the powergaming and metagaming questions click here

 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No magic armour

- Your Skin does not match your character’s background you picked as it clearly has the signs of noblity etc! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?  https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

- Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me! 

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

 - How does it make the roleplay environment unfair? Please redo your metagaming question.

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is not exactly what we are looking fo

 

To aid with fixing the powergaming and metagaming questions click here

 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No magic armour

- Your Skin does not match your character’s background you picked as it clearly has the signs of noblity etc! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?  https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

- Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me! 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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