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Sage1312

By Sage1312

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    Discord: Mae🌺 #0696
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is knowledge that can be obtained outside of roplay.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is when you do something that is not realistic.
    Status: Denied

I quickly back away "Please don't get so close." I look the right than the left and then answer "Im here to try to find a peaceful place to live, away from people. Do you know a place I could go?" I could feel the red coming onto my face. I was never good with talking to people, but its still a shock how bad I am at it.

Character Name: Sage.
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: long black hair with elf ears. She weighs 120lb and is 5,5. She wears a dark green sweater and long black pants.
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camocat9

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to multiple reasons, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
  • Your Character Biography states that your wood elven character lived within the War Nation of Krugmar-- due to long-lasting hostility between the orcs and the elves, this would most likely not happen, or if your character was born in Krugmar, their parents would most likely be slaves.
  • Your Character Biography is missing one lore reference! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Skin is too pale to be a wood elf. I would suggest making their skin slightly more tanned! (I also notice a slight bit of white located on one of their ears-- I don't know if this is meant to be an earring, or is simply a mistake on the skin).
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is at fault in the character, from their personality to their physique.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure you write about your character in third person!


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @camocat9#9373, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

 

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