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survivor5240
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: angie A#1187
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: i don't know?
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: i done know
    Status: Denied

i have came to this city to live a better life and to be someone respected 

 


Character Name: legolas
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: big beard scar on his cheek and he wares a brown vest with a brown shirt under it he is 6 feet tall blu eyes brown hair lean build
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help 

       https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

- Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

        https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action, your action must be in the 3rd person.

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.  https://app.grammarly.com/

  • Your Character’s Dream and Fear is too short. It must be at least four sentences long with more detail.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is dove#8701! Or you can message me through the forums!

If you have any questions I'm happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki!

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