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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: By not forcing actions on others. I let people react on their own and keep things realistic for my character.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It breaks fair RP because you use info your character shouldn’t know. It gives an unfair advantage and makes the situation feel less real.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Borin Boulderbelly
Character Race: Cave Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 45
Physical Description: cave dwarf 4'5, heavy frame and thick arms, bald, tunic, sturdy boots, and a tool belt
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

Borin Boulderbelly came from a small clan that lived deep in the mountains. His family his parents and two younger brothers had worked the mines for many years. Borin was close to them all. One day, while they were working underground, the tunnel suddenly collapsed. Borin tried to warn everyone, but the cave-in happened too fast. He managed to crawl out through the rubble, but his family was trapped inside. The memory of that day stayed with him—the dust, the silence, and the pain of losing the people he loved most.

After that, Borin didn’t have a home to go back to. He wandered for days, carrying the weight of his loss. Eventually, he found himself in this swampy town, tired and hoping to find a new place where he could start again.

Borin then moves into the tent, mud still clinging to his boots.

He sits down slowly, looking around the tent before meeting her eyes.

“Name’s Borin Boulderbelly,” I say. “I came here after a cave-in back home. Didn’t have many other places to go.”

He rests his hands on his knees.

“Didn’t expect anyone to be waiting for me. So why were you?”

 

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Changed Status to Pending

 

Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

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    • please write in the third person, using your character's pronouns instead of I
    • please give us more detail on your character's backstory. How did the cave-in make him feel?

 



 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @tarajessto let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

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My discord is @tarajessif you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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