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Tobi the elf

By Tobi the elf

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    Discord: TobimanCZv123#1542
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: knowing something you shouldn't at the moment which makes you have an unfiar advantage over others
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: making yourself way to powerful agains others
    Status: Denied

I would say:"Hello sir, I've come to this place to to shop for weapons to protect my village from any kind of danger". I would then walk away to look for supplies such as arrows maybe some better bows and pretty much any kind of supplies i would need.

Character Name: Tobi
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: My character is a brown haired guy with light purple and hes pretty skinny hes 165 cm and he is 60kg
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Your application has been put on PENDING , as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I would like you to include examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography states that he was born in Elvenesse. Since we haven't been on Almaris for 20 years this cannot be so, please change the place of birth to somewhere back in Arcas.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action and needs to be written in third person only.

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @拿铁#1608 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:  You have failed to make the correct changes within 24+ hours. After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @拿铁#1608, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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