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ToNoRu

By ToNoRu

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: ToNoRu#0212
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: its going by the meta for gamers
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: its realistic things that are made by players, like forcing cosmetics or emotes on a character
    Status: Denied

I would respond nicely and say, i come here to seek adventure, and greet them with a hi and my name

Character Name: ToNoRu
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: a casual 2021 looking type, 6'1 short black hair going down to the eyes, but is out of the eyes, kind of skinny-buff, weighs 141
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Josef_Rippelberg

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

- Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
- Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?


- Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

 

- Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include whether or not you've roleplayed before!


- Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include your definition of roleplay!

 

- Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 
 

- Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

 

- Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!


- Your Character Goal is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's goal connects with their biography!

 

- Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

 

- Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!


- Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
 

- Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home?authuser=0 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Hmmm#4176 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message Josef_Rippelberg to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

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