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TeboarX

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you (the player) know something act on something the character wouldn't know about
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: When you give yourself unfair advantages that don't make sense
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

“I hope he doesn’t think I'm ignoring him, that would be problematic,” Tebyn thinks as he slowly starts to increase his speed. As soon as he is out of sight he sighs in relief. he looks around the corner to make sure he’s not being followed, and heads off. ”I hope I never see him again.”

Character Name: Tebyn
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 48
Physical Description: Tebyn is a Caucasian male with blue eyes he has scars on his back.
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Amelica

 

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to IP connections, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Character Biography states that your character “mastered the axe,” which is not allowed; any such “mastery” must be achieved through roleplay on the server.

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is faulty in their personality. 

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards-it seems to be missing legs. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is inadequate; missing dialogue because what your character thinks to himself does not count as dialogue and should not be put in quotes.


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions or think a mistake was made, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025. I also strongly recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Guide for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/.

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