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TeboarX

By TeboarX

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: TeboarX#4622
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you (the player) know something act on something the character wouldn't know about
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When you give yourself unfair advantages that don't make sense
    Status: Denied

Tebyn was born in princedom with his mother and father when he was just six his father left him leaving him with his mother. After a while ,his mother became crazy she started hitting Tebyn a lot, and that led to Tebyn learning how to fight. He also decided to learn alchemy because he was awful at magic.  When he was 13 he started to be drove mad by his mom he ended up severely injuring her and running away. After that he decided there was no extra terrestrial   being because if there were he wouldn’t have gone through the stuff he went through. while he was on the streets he ran into a fighting instructor he taught him axe fighting. Tebyn then sought wisdom because he felt as if he wasn’t worthy of anything yet. he went to a monk and by the end of the time he was there he could tell exactly how many second went by, but there was one problem Tebyn had become emotionless he didn't sympathize for “victims” of death because in his mind that was weak. He told his mentor of this and he was immediately thrown out for the second time in his life. He wants to fight wars for he feels that's all he’s good at.

 

 

my sister has an account, that is why there are two people sharing an ip address.

Character Name: Tebyn
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 48
Physical Description: 6'2, Caucasian, Primarily grey, 160 lbs., mildly muscular, Blue eyes , likes to wear jackets.
Roleplay Scenario:

I stand there for a moment before responding, “I am here to learn new things.” I say with a hint of annoyance in my voice

 

I wish I could just walk through a town with out being stopped. I think to myself.

 

“Excuse me sir but I must get going” I quickly say trying to get out of the situation                          

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to too many errors, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Meta and Power gaming definitions lack clarity. Please add an example for each of these.
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
  • In your Bio you need to fix the following errors
    • You can not have had your character have experience with either alchemy or magic. These skills must be aquired in role play
    • “Extra Terrestrial” Means aliens, not a higher power. Find a better word to use in this instance.
  • In your Physical Description you state “Primarily grey” with no refrence as to what this is. Fix this
  • In your Personality traits you state your character is “Sociopathic”, and intend to use this as a negative trait. This is a mental disorder, and is not what we are looking for as a negative trait. This negative trait would most likely only affect the people around you, and not yourself. Also, implying a mental disorder is inherently negative isn’t cool.
  • In your Roleplay scenario you use “I” in your actions instead of “He/him/his”. Please correct this, as this is the standard usage in roleplay on the server.
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @LordScisso#5640, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/

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