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TEMMPP0

By TEMMPP0

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Twitter
    Discord: TEMMPP0#0623
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is like cheating but very bad when you metagame on an RP game.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When do I say I will be a king but the character is not? Sry.
    Status: Denied

He was born and later orphaned. He then met his best friend and spent hundred of years venturing the unknown world but later they encounter a powerful monster a Dragon. They fight well but later they discovered that they can't kill the dragon without a sacrifice for one's soul. My character best friend sacrifices himself in order to kill the dragon. After my character's best friend died, my character swore that he should be hunting monsters until he meets his true enemy that will kill him or die until he run out of luck. 

Character Name: Temp or Temmpp0
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: My character should have green eyes, dirty blonde hair, having a masculine body, standing at 6'0ft, weighting at 80kg, and wearing mage clothes.
Roleplay Scenario:

I came into this lovely city because I wanted to find companions that will be able to defend there selves and a loyal one.

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Your application has unfortunately been DENIED at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

 

Username: Please include a valid Minecraft name upon registering.

 

Definitions: Both definitions are very limited, and require some serious work. I'd advise looking up some definitions, understanding them before answering these again. Do not plagiarise any answers, or you will be denied instantly.

 

 

Character Name: Your character's name should be something realistic, please don't mix it up with a username. Temp would be fine, but make sure to leave it at that.

 

 

Backstory: Please choose a more appropriate and realistic backstory for your character's origins. In your backstory, you've mentioned that 'Temp' has been venturing for hundreds of years, despite him being 18 according to your application. Don't try to be far-fetched, as this is only the beginning of your character's story - sometimes less is more, I'd strongly recommend a humble beginning. Try not to reach for any generic tropes/ideas either, make it unique!

 

In your next attempt, be sure to also include the following:

- At least ONE reference to Lord of The Craft's lore - I've attached some links below to some useful wiki pages, relevant to the character you've applied to join with.

 

Almaris (Current Map/World)
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

 

Descendant Races (Refer to High Elves section)
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races#High_Elf

 

- A rethought out backstory, please don't make your character a hero from the start. Choose something more realistic and appropiate. Some ideas would be he was raised as a street urchin in the Silver City of Haelun'or, or perhaps he is the son of a mercenary. 

 

Character Skin/Description: In your character's description, you mentioned he has green eyes whereas the skin has pale/silver eyes. Please make sure your description is well written, and matches your skin. Make sure your application is at least 6 sentences long as well - some ideas to help expand on a backstory is to include significant events, which can include traumatic experiences that help shape your character into the person they are. Perhaps a significant other was killed, as you included in your current backstory - how did this affect him? What challenges does he face, and how does he plan on overcoming them?

 

Roleplay Scenario: Your roleplay scenario needs serious work as well. Treat it like a normal roleplay interaction, and keep it simple if you find it difficult. It's just a way for us to determine your roleplay quality, and make sure it meets our server's standards. In your next roleplay scenario, please include the following:

 

- Have your roleplay scenario be AT LEAST four sentences long.

- Include at least one dialogue surrounded by quotes.

- At least one action, where your character is doing something physical.

- Make sure your roleplay scenario doesn't have any metagaming, or powergaming in it.

- Do not include any personal thoughts into your emote. Emotes should be physical, and something that other people would be able to see/feel/hear.

- Make sure you write it out in third person.

 

 

Feel free to re-apply at any time after this denial, just make sure you make the changes with the aforementioned things. Don't be disheartened, and don't give up - if things are too hard, feel free to reach out to me either the Forums via a PM, or contact me directly on my Discord: D A N N Y#2021.

 

Best of luck, I hope to see you on the server soon.

 

 

 

 

 

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