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TerryLi_Hb

By TerryLi_Hb

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: use unlogical way (in game) to achieve some goal(like communicate in reality to help gaming)
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: use unrealistic,unlogical action in the game
    Status: Denied

I come here for a new  oppotunity.A new life.I come for adventure and wealth.Also for a deal.

Character Name: TerryLi
Character Race: Adunian
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: white T-shirt in a black jacket,black jeans and shoes, a red eye and another is cyan,black hair,thin,tall,1.86m,60kg
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help <img src=

  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography states that your character's parents were killed by orcs. This is a common character trope, so I recommend editing this part!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character's race! Adunians cannot have red or cyan eyes. I recommend looking at this wiki page on Adunians for future reference. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Adunians

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

  • Your character's clothing is a bit modern, so I would recommend editing this part of your Physical Description as well.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Please keep in mind, as a side note, that Adunians are not half-elves, they are only distantly related to elves. If you apply as a half-elf, you would select either human or elf for your race.

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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