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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Thanatos9091#0796
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: asking for help when out of rp
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: forcing a action
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario. looking for 2 people about in theirs 60s now. pls their my parents 

Character Name: eivor
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 30
Physical Description: red and blue hood and has a yellow and grey eye his body type is slim but muscular
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help <img src=

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it!

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race (Humans cannot have yellow eyes!) Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Alternatively, you can change your character’s race to match your skin!

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

  • Make sure not to abbreviate words such as 'pls' and 'thx' in your Roleplay Scenario Response.

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race (Humans cannot have yellow eyes). For more information on what humans look like on LoTC, check out this link here: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Highlanders

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description - (outfit does not match). Please amend this accordingly!

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [sarahbarah#0007]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message sarahbarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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