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ThatLameAllan
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: .ahelia
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: All players should have fair opportunities to play. They shouldnt have advantages or disadvantages while others don't. I'd ask a mod first if what I'm doing is right, to avoid accidentally doing it.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It would be bad for the roleplay, because the storyline wouldn't be interesting and there shouldn't be any 'all knowing' Character
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Aethos Eyonar
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Race: Elf Height: 6'2 weight: 140 lbs Hair: blue-ish grey (if that's possible) Eyes: green Outfit: White blouse and black elegant pants, glasses
Roleplay Scenario:

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

"Uh, me?" I look around the tent, unsure, before hesistantly sitting down. I wasn't sure how she knew me and if she really knew me, but I was a bit curious. "uh.. my story, huh...? Well.." I was a bit shy to tell her, but i collected all my courage and answered "I was just passing through. I'm from a kingdom far away from here. It felt boring over there, all i had was books to entertain me. So, I decided to travel. Meet new people along the way, and maybe make some friends or travel companions. I was afraid of the dangers of travelling first, but now, I know a little more about it. It's not so bad once you first experienced it. It's nice to see the nations myself, instead of through a book or tales. So.. that's how i got here. May I ask if I know you? You speak to me with such familliarity."

 

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

 

 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No blue hair.

- Please include more backstory even if your character doesn't wish to speak on it.

- Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No blue hair.

- Please include more backstory even if your character doesn't wish to speak on it.

- Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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