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The_Don_lol

By The_Don_lol

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: The Don#4079
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using out of character information, in roleplay when your character doesn't know about that information
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: playing a game with the intention of maximising progress towards a certain goal
    Status: Denied

“Howdy!” Will began as he shakes his hand. “My name is Will and I’ve come here in search of a new life.” The man smiles with a sense of wonder in his eyes, “well you’ve certainly come to the right place” he half shouted as he spun around with his arms open. “Well thanks!” Will said as he pulled his backpack closer to his back. “Oh and one more thing” the man shouted to Will, “make sure you’re careful there’s some shady people around here!” Will was confused, “what do you mean?” he shouted as he ran back to the man but the man had since disappeared. “wha...? He was just here I swear!” “Who was just hear?” an old lady said “the.. the man he.. he was just here a second ago!” he shouted. “what are you talking about no one was there i was watching you talk to yourself” will begins to run in fear from what just happened 

Character Name: Will
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Will is neither fat nor is he skinny he is more like a bulky man that has a bit of an odd face but has a calming look about him
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Changed Status to Denied

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to having too many mistakes, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

→ Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly. I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references. Please remember to include at least two. These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

 

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are?

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.

 

→ Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail. If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.

 

→ Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

https://app.grammarly.com/ 

 

Just because you are denied does not mean it’s the end of the world; don’t worry. I suggest you read more information about the server and read the application very carefully and thoroughly. You may apply again anytime afterwards. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord AlphaMoist#5682, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: 

→ https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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