the_supreme_onee

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
 

- Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

- Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

- Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include whether or not you've roleplayed before!

- Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

- Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

- Your Personality Traits/Quirks states that they are christian. 1. Christianity is not a personality trait. 2. Christianity does not exist in lotc 

- Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!

- Your Character Goal is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

- Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

- Your Character Fear must be a fear that is unique to them-- for example, everyone is afraid of death.

- Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

- Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

- Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
https://app.grammarly.com/

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Hmmm#4176 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message Josef_Rippelberg to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!