TheAnimeTimelord

Hey bud and welcome to Lord of the Craft! I've taken some time to review your application and there are a few things I need for you to edit before I can make a conclusion on your application. Do not worry, you aren't being denied, you'll simply be given up to 24 hours to make any and all edits necessary that I require. These edits are as followed:

• I need you to expand a bit on your definitions. There is a bit more to what you gave me that I'd like to see added.
• This is a high fantasy roleplaying server. While I will not deny you for your choice in a character name, 'Flame' is not necessarily fitting of the theme. You aren't required to change it, but do consider doing so. It can always be an alias or nickname for the character if you decide to do so.
• I would appreciate it if you'd edit up your backstory a bit. It's not so bad, but the grammar could use a bit of work to make it a bit easier to read. 
• Also, you've failed to use some form of preexisting lore of the server within your backstory. If you could add anywhere from 1-3 references, to show you've read some lore and familiarized yourself with it, it will raise your chances of being accepted immensely.
• Sadly, you're first character on the server cannot be a child. As such, they are required to be at least 18 years of age. 
• For your skin/description, I wouldn't describe it as a hoodie. Make a few edits to the description so it's a bit more theme-fitting. Such as a blue "cloak" rather than a "hoodie".

You have 24 hours to make the necessary edits to the application before it is denied. If you require any help, please feel free to send me a message here on the forums, or @ me on the status update bar or on my profile directly. I'm more than willing to help and answer any questions you have. If you seek further aid, you can join the LotC New Player Discord, where we have a large number of dedicated players who seek to aid applicants in joining our community!

New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/X4tfun

30 minutes ago, Skale said:

Changed Status to Under Review

Ok thaks

6 hours ago, TheAnimeTimelord said:

Ok thaks

Hey bud!
 

I went ahead and took another look at your application, as you've made some edits, such as the definitions and the name! Which are excellent, however I require a few more edits before I will make a final decision. Do not worry, you have the full 24 hour period I mentioned earlier to take care of it, so don't feel rushed. I still require:

• An addition of 1-3 examples of currently accepted Lore of the server into your application.
• Your character's age changed, as you cannot apply with a character under the age of 18.
• I would also still work on editing up the backstory to clean it up a bit, on time of the lore additions. A bit of grammar goes a long way, my friend.

Good luck! Please, please, please don't be afraid to contact me if you need any help!

As it has been 24 hours and the necessary edits have not been made, I sadly must deny you. You can post another application in three hours if you'd like, with the necessary edits. Once you do so, it will come under review once more. Below you will find the changes you should make with your next application to see success!

• You backstory still requires the addition of 1-3 pieces of lore that show you've familiarized yourself with current and accepted server lore.
• The minimum age a character can be upon applying is 18, anything younger is against the rules.
• Clean the backstory up a bit, fix up some of the simpler grammar mistakes.

As I've said in the past, if you require any help, don't be afraid to contact me. And here is another link to the New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/WeSesV