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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: TheDeathmare#0776
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I had to put it in Biography.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I had to put it in Biography.
    Status: Denied

I want to note that I wish to be Adunian but there wasn’t a option so I chosed to be a human.

 

Biography:
Asgrim was born in small settlement in Atlas. Unlike other Adunians he was born weak but still wanted to be in the centre of attention and acted like a leader and was trying to become a soldier. Though since of his weak build he had to use light weapons thus why he dual wields 2 daggers (this part goes with my pvp playstyle of dual wielding 2 swords).

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Asgrim didn’t really a bright childhood. His dad bullied him for being a weakling and his mom died during his birth, which his dad blamed him for too. Thought his older brother always supported him.

When everyone was moving to Arcas in 1705 he was on a small knorr with his family members. Sadly they were caught in a thunderstorm while travelling to Arcas and their boat got destroyed. He was lucky and he did succed to swim to the nearby land but his family members didn’t. Asgrim had change of personality when he lost his dear brother. Not knowing where he landed or what to do he made a little hut nearby of his landing to the land. 

The lore will be continued in settlement (when made) lore.

 

 

I had to put it here since I was getting error beforehand.

Define metagaming in your own words

When someone's roleplaying character has knowledge that, that character realistically can not. In other words using knowledge of a roleplayer himself as an advantage.

Define powergaming in your own words

Someone's roleplaying character being too strong, this can be either psyhically or emotionally (having no lacks in personality or their character being super strong and agile and knows to use magic). In most cases people with powergaming characters abuse others.

 

More info: I am the leader of community group called “The Unholy”, that consists of around 100 members (realistically around 15 members would play since some are too toxic, some are only towny server players and some can’t bother to read the lore), and I was planning on recruiting them to this server and making a big settlement (hopefully a nation too) when I get accepted. Most of us dont come from roleplaying servers so we dont have much roleplay experience including me sorry, but we are willing to learn it. They will all apply shorty after me if I like the server.

P.S. I am going to edit the armour out my skin and add some nordic cloth.

 


Character Name: Asgrim
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 48
Physical Description: Body-build - Weak,Skinny
Weight - 6'1
Weight - 160 lbs
Facial hair color - White/A bit blonde too
Eye color - Black
Attire - Black cape/hood
Roleplay Scenario:

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

*Puts a slight smile on his face, seeing kindness of the gentlemen*

“Thanks for the welcome, I was just looking around the city. When I came upon this market. Do you work here?”

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied because it had too many errors. Here is some feedback on the aforementioned errors: 

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things that you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you can’t figure out what more to add, here are some questions you can ask yourself: what is your character afraid of? How do they act around strangers? What is their resting disposition?

  • Your Physical Description is inconsistent with your character’s race. Please visit the wiki page for said race and read about the acceptable physical attributes.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC’s standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you can’t find anything better.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please find one that matches. Alternatively, you may correct your physical description so it matches the skin you use.

 

You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

 

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