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Thederpking012
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Brotato102#5208
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: roplaying in real life to explain what's happening or to ask for stuff
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: you say something has you are doing the action or you imagine you doing that power or action in the roleplay
    Status: Denied

*Looks back at him in the eyes.* "why hello there my comrade, I came here for one thing. I need to find someone." *shows a picture of him.* "Do you know where he is i have some unfinished business with him." 


Character Name: Darth Galactus
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: he has glowing yellow eyes. he has a scar going down his face to the back of his head. is 6 foot tall. muscular is bald due to scar. 190 ibs
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.
 

  • Your Character Biography did not have enough lore references. Please include at least 2 lore references and and 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are? (ECT)

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards as well as it does not match your physical description. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

(you may also edit them so that they fit your description better)

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home
 

 

  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

(Please be sure to give reasoning/examples in your next App)

 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.

https://app.grammarly.com/
( Grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors )

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Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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