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michaelobk
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    Discord: michaeljackosn4702
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: i try to more focus on playing with my fun stuff like exploring and socializing and tbh i just like the exprience of progress right when youre too strong it gets boring
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: cause its ROLE play.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Jacques Bermon Webster IX
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: hes above average in height and a lean body he has dark skin and long medium black hair spends all his money on style rather than food
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


he sits down eying down the old hag with no fear, then proceeds to treat her request as her offering therapy and he starts yapping about all the shmuk like "oh i suppose it all started with my siblings" as he kept talking the hag got more and more confused and patient less but listens. "well from birth i wasnt the brightest kid but with my father and siblings all become scholars and great and knowledgeful people he stayed the dumbest in the room from loneliness he developed light schizophrenia and likes to talk about how hes the messiah when focused and stressed, when he dueled his brother and rather then doing it properly like a elf he just threw a piece of marble at the side of his head his father realizing a scholar life isnt for him sent him away to adventure and see a world now he travels and gathers weapons and expriences" 

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Please add more depth to the metagaming and powergaming questions

 

  • Please add a bit more roleplay and character depth to the roleplay scenario

 

  • Please make you emotes and actions clear it seems to slip between first person narrative and then to third person narrative

 

  • Please adjust your skin to align with the chosen race



 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @echo_42069to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub! : New Player Hub

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Changed Status to Denied



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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

  • Please make above changes. Unfortunately we have had to deny this due to not being fixed.



 

My discord is @echo_42069 if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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