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TheHumanoidGoose
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Breaking roleplay be revealing something that either doesn't exist or your character doesn't know
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Making yourself godly
    Status: Denied

A war veteran how seeks to right wrong as much as he can and doesn’t stand for foolishness.  he was born in the years before a war and once he grew of age he enlisted.  in his time fighting the goblins he saw horrible things his usual cheerful behavior turned to stone cold anger.  when he returned home he found that his village had been burned to the ground.  he used what he could to get back on his feet, got married, settled down, and had kids.  until one night his family was slaughtered by house robber.  he has vowed revenge against crime.  he works as a bounty hunter now.  never staying in one place for long, never making connections.  he started as a chipper young man who has been hardened by tragic events and war.


Character Name: Thallos IronBorn
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 67
Physical Description: Tough and grizzled
Roleplay Scenario:

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

I gaze at the man stunned by his joyfulness and say. “That is no matter of yours”.  i then ask “where might be your jail?”.  once he responds i thank him and move onwards.

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied because it had too many errors. Here is some feedback on the aforementioned errors: 

 


You may reapply at any time as long as you correct your mistakes as suggested above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

 

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