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TheMacroWave

By TheMacroWave

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    Discord: Macro#7410
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using info you learned outside of character in rp
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: being overly over powered
    Status: Denied

Macron steps off the boat and sees a bunch of shops but one catches his attention, the weapon shop. He walks into the shop and places down 10 silver coins and buys 2 bundles of arrows and gets his sword polished. He then leaves and continues to browse the shops.

Character Name: Macron
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: slightly skinny, brown hair, blue eyes, and is 5.6
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sarahbarah

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Farfolk tend to differ in appearance. Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Alternatively, you can change your character’s race to match your skin!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

  • Make sure your Roleplay Scenario Response responds to the correct prompt!

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [sarahbarah#0007]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message sarahbarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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