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Theminereric123

By Theminereric123

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: Crafty AKA problem solver#8014
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: metagaming is like knowing things in a roleplay gam only you would now in reel life
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: to boost your self higher to gain a advantage over every one else
    Status: Denied

.......Thank you sir i am glad to be here as much as i would like to chat here all day there are a lot of things to do and see here and i would like to see and do as much of it be for i have  to git hard at work 

Character Name: Goldmane
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 6'5 hair color is Blond and there eyes are red dark red they muscular weight is 203 they have a scar on there right eye
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography states that your character is 20% resistant to hunger, can run for longer, but can only heal by eating food. This does not fit with the server lore, so please be sure to edit this and all other parts of your application that refer to this.

  • Your Character's Likes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they like about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards (due to modern clothing and lack of shading). Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks. 

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear!

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. Humans cannot have red eyes! 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly!

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [teawithsarah#0808]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message teawithsarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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