Jump to content

TheRat69


Ratian
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: Rat#0351
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Now, I think it's roleplay, I'm not really sure.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Power gaming to me is progress and reaching a specific goal.
    Status: Denied

(before the demise of my character's family)

 

I walk into my home, and I see all my family member's were having a gathering, he saw sibling's, his parents and his ancestors, that day, his mother said "welcome, Ratian to the family gathering." He was confused because his mother was acting like she was not part of the family, My character say's acting the same way as his mother "well hello there, uhm.." not knowing what to say, he gave up thinking of something to say and decided to sit down after a long day. Ratian was trying to ask questions but they were ignoring him, so Ratian decided to sit there in silence, not long after, they felt a rumble, they slowly started to panic, and a minute after the rumbling stopped, thinking that they were safe they continued, Ratian wanted to explore what was making that rumble and he saw thing, then out of nowhere a cat jumped him and Ratian went back into his cave like home for safty, everyone started to wonder why he was heavily breathing and sweating, He said "There was a cat outside, almost killed me." and they started to question him, judge him and insult him for doing such an act, and then a few cats decided that they would attack our cave, and when no one was expecting it. They tore through the dirt, grabbing and dangling them, after they tease them, they just eat them, Ratian saw this coming and left before this happened, after the judgement, not knowing that this had happened. He came back and calm down, He came back to a huge hole and some blood, not even knowing what he had done, he ran as fast as his little legs can carry him.   

 


Character Name: Ratian
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Eye's: gray
Hight: 5.9
Wight: skinny
hair: brown
Screenshot of Skin:



User Feedback

Recommended Comments

X7wBEfdiavTzJJT70fS13FZWNlMzUfy1Jn5tTlH0tnl-KCmdhYQ7vFyIDoUyvGyodlsFxZxYgwUWoPNuy3tRfrxSPFyYk5ZZy7PCDSXND-sVhWJYid-O6FifjRwoFLNiB5mQBKtg

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why. Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

  • Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are on the right track, but not quite there yet. Examples are recommended to ensure we know that you understand. To check out our metagaming and powergaming rules for the server, please look at this link. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

  • Your roleplay definition is on the right track, but it could be explained further for us to know that you understand how roleplaying works.

  • Your character biography needs to have at least two lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be locations, major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas 

  • Your character biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • You character must be a base race.

  • Your character's skin must match your character's described appearance!

  • A cat cannot have murdered your character's family, please make a different fear.

  • Your character’s likes need to be at least two sentences long and explain why they like that about themselves.

  • Your character’s dislikes cannot be that they're a rat.

  • Your roleplay scenario response is a bit off. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your roleplay scenario response must follow the given prompt. Please fix this!

  •  

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ AudTheOdd#1560]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message AudryTheOddity to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

Link to comment
Share on other sites


  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    No registered users viewing this page.

×
×
  • Create New...