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TheRightWayUp

By TheRightWayUp

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: TheRightWayUp#6968
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Good Roleplaying
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Bad Roleplaying
    Status: Denied

"i come here to find the attackers of my parents"

Character Name: Earl Hugelin
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: He has black eyes,bald
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camocat9

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
  • Your What is Roleplay Response is too short and doesn't properly answer whether or not you roleplayed before.
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 
  • Your Physical Description states that your character has black eyes. Humans cannot have black eyes, please change this accordingly.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • Your Character Fear, Like, and Dislike are all too short.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
  • Your Skin is too yellow to be any viable human skin. Please take a look at our skin archive for skins you can use, or some examples you can look at to make edits to your skin!

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @camocat9#9373, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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