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Thommygun123

By Thommygun123

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: Thommygun#0778
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using Informations from other characters my character can't know, or using informations from real life.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: If a Player tries to make his own character as powerfull as possible and specialy more than the character would be at most in normal situations
    Status: Denied

"Hey, my name is Thommy. I was traveling with my boat and just found this city in hope to find a new place for a new live."

Character Name: Thommy
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 27
Physical Description: I have black eyes, brown trousers, brown hairs, normal body, 80 Kg wight, white skin color
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography mentions real life countries such as Germany and England which are not countries within LOTC, there are similar nations however such as Oren and Haense.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should not include any of your character's thoughts.

  • You must not control any other characters but your own in your Roleplay Scenario Response

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Luxcio#84321]  I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message Luxcio to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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