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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Timulation#5127
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: having your character know information that was learned outside of the game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: being overpowered and unnatural in the way you play videogames.
    Status: Denied

"i am looking for a chance to go on adventures, and show my skills as a fighter."


Character Name: Fortius Delmi
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: he is a tall, strong figure, with noticeable muscles.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason that too many errors were made.

 

 

Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are correct though please include an example to each, so I can tell you fully understand!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

→  Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

Your Character Biography also states a few references that aren't in our lore!

Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

Your  Character Fear, likes and dislikes  must be at least 2 sentences long and contain a reason please ❤️

Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.

 

If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Demon_Lilly#9033, and I recommend you join the 

LotC Discord using the following invite: 

 https://discord.com/invite/7sTjWYX

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