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Lira Goldburge
  • Rules: Yes
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Being a good person and playing for fun not only for myself but for those around me.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It ruins the experience of going through the story yourself.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Lira Goldsburge
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: High Elf born in Celia'nor. Golden eyes, Rare strawberry blonde hair, 5' 3", 125 LBS, Pale white skin.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


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Lira’s mind raced, then she slowly spoke, her voice quieter than usual, as if testing the air. “I’ve... run away. From a life I didn’t choose. My father wanted me to marry the prince of the High Elves. He thought it was the best way for our family, the best way for me." Her fingers twisted together in her lap as she spoke, a nervous energy pulsing through her. “But I couldn’t do it. I can’t live my life shackled to a man I don’t love. To a life I didn’t choose. So, I left.”

She paused, her throat tightening at the words, the weight of her decision settling deeper. "I came here because I don't know where else to go. I don’t know what I’m looking for. I just… I want something real. Something mine."

Lira took a deep breath, trying to steady herself, unsure of how much to say. She had been running for days now, and the only thing she could think about was escaping her father’s plans.

But the thing she hadn't considered was what would come next.

She met the old woman’s gaze again. “Do you think… do you think I can find that? A life that’s mine, and maybe even someone who’ll love me for who I am, not for who I’m supposed to be?”

Her voice was softer now, a vulnerability creeping in that she hadn’t meant to show.

The tent seemed to hold its breath as the hag leaned back, her hands folded in her lap. The flickering candles danced in the silence.

"Maybe," the hag said slowly, her voice like gravel. "But you’ll need to find your courage first. Only then can you find what you seek." 

 

The hag’s sharp, weathered eyes narrowed as she studied Lira more closely, her gaze lingering on the young woman’s features. A curious tilt of her head followed. “Strawberry blonde hair, you say?” Her voice rasped as if the very idea had caught her off guard.

Lira frowned slightly, running a hand through her unruly hair, now damp from the thick air of the swamp. “Yes, what of it?” she asked, a little defensive.

The old woman leaned forward, her gnarled hands trembling slightly as she pointed at Lira’s hair. “I know many elves, child—High Elves especially. But strawberry blonde… that’s not the norm, is it? Most of them are born with hair as pale as moonlight or silver. This...” She hesitated, her tone tinged with surprise. “This is different. Unique.”

Lira’s hand instinctively went to her hair again, a slight flush creeping up her neck. “It’s just... my hair. I never thought much of it.”

The hag’s expression shifted, her weathered eyes suddenly sharp with more than just curiosity. “Ah,” she murmured, her fingers tapping lightly on the table. “The bloodlines of the High Elves are often bound by ancient rules. But you… you’re special, aren’t you, child?”

Lira’s heart skipped a beat. “What do you mean?”

The hag leaned back, her voice lowering, heavy with a quiet intensity. “Strawberry blonde is a mark, or so the old stories say. A sign of one who is destined for a path different from the others. A path of choice, not fate. It’s rare... and it means you carry the power to change the course of your life.”

Lira blinked, confused and intrigued at once. “I... I don’t understand. How could my hair—”

“Your hair tells more than you think,” the hag interrupted, her gaze steady and piercing. “It marks you, child. It’s a sign that you’re meant to carve your own way. The question is… will you?”

Lira’s breath caught in her throat. Destined for a different path? It was almost too much to believe, but something in the old woman’s eyes made her wonder if this was more than a coincidence.

Before she could gather her thoughts, the hag continued, her tone shifting again, quieter now. “A high elf with hair like yours… running from an arranged marriage…” She let out a soft chuckle. “Perhaps you are the one I’ve been waiting for after all.”

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Please include your understanding of the term Powergaming and Metagaming, your current reply shows lack of understanding. If you need help, please refer to our wiki for definitions and examples: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 
  • Your roleplay scenario needs to be at least 6 sentences minimum. Including character dialogues and actions written in 3rd POV. 

EX: John grimaced upon the dirty cushion but took a seat anyway. “Hello ma’am, good evening…”

  • Up until your application's been accepted, you've been a background character. This means your character cannot be well-known, wealthy, royal, knows magic, etc. Your story breaks some of the rules, such as being well-known/wealthy enough to marry a high prince, As well as hair related mark. Please make the required changes.
  • Your skin is not server appropriate! Please take a look at our skin archieve: https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive (Skin)

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is KaptainScarlet! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • Please include your understanding of the term Powergaming and Metagaming, your current reply shows lack of understanding. If you need help, please refer to our wiki for definitions and examples: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 
  • Your roleplay scenario needs to be at least 6 sentences minimum. Including character dialogues and actions written in 3rd POV. 

EX: John grimaced upon the dirty cushion but took a seat anyway. “Hello ma’am, good evening…”

  • Up until your application's been accepted, you've been a background character. This means your character cannot be well-known, wealthy, royal, knows magic, etc. Your story breaks some of the rules, such as being well-known/wealthy enough to marry a high prince, As well as hair related mark. Please make the required changes.
  • Your skin is not server appropriate! Please take a look at our skin archieve: https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive (Skin)

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is KaptainScarlet! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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