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Tjens

By Tjens

    • Rules: No
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Tjens#2329
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Ah, not being in-world with your character thoughts and actions.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Basically role-play cheating
    Status: Denied

‘Warm welcome, high walls and a wealthy population? I bet there are some shoes to be fixed in here!’ Tjens thought by himself
"Certainly, the only aspiration I have today is help to help you get rid of any blisters and nails, craft you some new boots with the most supple of leathers!”, he said,

“I have brought with me the softest of velours, and I'm looking for a place to hone my craft and help the poor and rich as if they're one!”

Character Name: Tjens
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 172
Physical Description: Of average build but slighty athletic, Tjens is part elf-part Human. His attire plain and simple, suited for work and travel if needed.
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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to not agreeing to the rules, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please refer to our Wiki for help!
  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, but it’s not quite there. Please review our Wiki for help. 
  • Your Character Age must be less than 150 if you are applying for any race other than human (which then the cap is 100). Please change this accordingly. 
  • If you are playing as half-elf-half-human, your character would inherit both the curse of infertility (can only have kids every 10-15 years) and the curse of a short lifespan (can only grow as old as 150 years old). As such, your Character Age must be younger, unless you want to play a very old man. 
  • Your Physical Description states that your character is “part elf-part Human”. However, you state that your character is a Halfling under “Character Race”. These are not the same thing. Please refer to our Wiki for help on what halflings are, and change one!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response does not include an action. In addition, you emote what your character thinks, though this is not something that’d be visible to other characters. Please remove your character’s thoughts and include an action. 
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please refer to our Skin Archive for reference for acceptable skins, and let me know if you need any help. In addition, you can request a skin on our LotC discord for free, and it will be custom-made!
  • Your Character Biography states, “Tjens's early years were spend in the halls of the wood elf nobilty,” though your character cannot start off as noble. Please fix this accordingly.
  • Your Character Biography states, “too many worlds”, though there aren’t that many worlds in Lord of the Craft. I’m a bit confused on what you mean. In addition, your character should not start off with any rare knowledge.
  • Your Character Biography states, “Tjens enters the lands of Lord of Craft.” However, your character would be born in the lands of the game. There are other maps and such, though your character must be born in the lands of this game. 
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Guide for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/.

 

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