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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Luke_12k#6117
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using information your character doesnt know but you as the player does therefore giving yourself an advantage
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: When you force an action on someone, for example giving yourself instakill powers or giving yourself some ability to not let the enemy fight back or forcing someone to accept a wound.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

I would not trust this man but i would be intrigued to find out more about why he is being so nice. Its never too good to be true. I would gain his trust, and then betray him, kill him. In this way i would gain his riches and unlock the secrets found within this strange city! when i kill him i would say.

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Curse you and your family

 

Character Name: Aeolus
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 30
Physical Description: Aeolus is small and nimble. He is 5 feet 10 and is very skinny, weighing around 50 kg brown hair, blue eyes and normally wears a wool bottom and top.
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Hello! Your application has been put on pending because there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted.  These are:

  • In your Character Biography, you state your character has moved to and is currently living in Curon. This is inaccurate, as Curon no longer exists. Please refer to our Settlement Guide if you need assistance choosing a new place to live in your backstory.
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Human_Settlement_Guides
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides
  • In your Character Biography, you state that your character is 50 years old. However, this is contradictory to what your Character Age directly states. Please fix this.
  • In your Physical Description, you mention your character being 5’10 but only 50kg. This height-to-weight ratio is wildly inaccurate, even for a naturally thin individual. Please revisit this and change it.
  • In your Personality Traits/Quirks, you use the word ‘naughty’, which leads to some negative connotations. Lord of the Craft is a PG13 server, so please take care to avoid saying things that might break that rule.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario isn’t quite what we were looking for. It’s not a ‘what would you do long term’ question, but a ‘what in this very moment would your character say and/or do?’ If you need assistance with this, feel free to shoot me a DM via Discord.

 

When you’ve finished making the necessary adjustments, please let me know by DMing me @AccioNily#0515 via Discord, or send me a forum message. If the changes are not made in 24 hours, your application will be denied.

If you need help, feel free to join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) and take a look at our New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/).

For additional help, please view the following wiki/forum links:

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Haense_Settlement_Guide

 

 

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teeylin


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Hello! Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to failing to make the required edits in time. However, here are the things that would have to change to be accepted: 

 

  • Everything mentioned in the previous Pending comment.
     


After you change these things, feel free to reapply at any time by making a new application. If you’ve got questions, please DM me over discord @AccioNily#0515.

I  recommended you take another look at the New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/) and join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) for more information and/or help if you have not already.

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