Jump to content

TROYPHUS


Troyphus
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: Troyphus#9717
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: By progressing your characters story slowly and understand building a character's life takes time.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: it gives the player an unfair advantage in the roleplay
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

Without making eye contact I utter the words, "A story is a thing worth telling."

 

'But...if you wish to know, it would be rude to refuse."

 

"When I was a boy my village was a very desolate place, where the people would do nothing but work..." I look the woman in her eyes, "...But on the occasion of Hollows Eve, our people would be able to enjoy the festivities and participate in dressing up as a way to scare away the evil spirits from our home."

 

'That was until about 17 years ago." With my arms now uncrossed I say, "there was a girl who my friend and I would mess with...and on that night, my friend thought itd be amusing to push her near the bonfire in the center of the town."

 

"When the moment was right he pushed her...but it was too much and she ended up falling in."

 

"The people tried there best to put out the fire but by the time it was out it was too late..."

 

"...The girl had been severely burned everywhere on her body to the point where all that was left was a burnt husk."

 

'She was only able to live for moments after and only had time to say 'I love you' to her father who lost his wife a few years before."

 

"the father, filled with rage, asked everyone there who had done it."

 

"Within moments my friend had raised his hand and told him he knew."

 

"When I looked at him he looked at me and with one finger had pinned the blame on me." I close my eyes, "The town all agreed I had to pay...The punishment...was to receive the same pain inflicted onn the young girl."

 

"The only reason I live is my mother begged for my life, they agreed to only a part...my face." 

 

"From that point on, I lived with the punishment of a murderer...I was trapped in a prison for 8 years before they decided to sell me off into slavery, for 7 years I endured the torture...until I was bought by a kind pumpkin farmer who took pity on me."

 

"He gave me the mask and allowed me to stay with him, he made me feel like a human again."

 

"Everything was well until his isolated home was raided bandits and they took his life."

 

"Now I took it upon myself to avenge the man who gave me a new life."


Character Name: Trophaestus
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 27
Physical Description: face disfigured, pumpkin on head (A Rubber mask), leather and iron clothes (MC Skin), fairly athletic build, 6'2", weight 190,
Screenshot of Skin:



User Feedback

Recommended Comments

8U775oq.png

 

Your application has been set to Pending for now, as we found some areas that need revising.

Don’t worry though - once your changes are made, you’ll be back on track to roleplaying with us in no time.

 

- Your Metagaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- When talking about your character’s actions, remember to use 3rd person.

 

- Please remove the topic of slavery from your application.

 

You have 48 hours to make these changes.

Once your changes are complete, please reach out to me on the forums @Amayonnaise. You can also click on my name here to find my profile.

 

 If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance:

Discord

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions, or to receive help from other players with your pending application.

 

If you need more ideas, or to research more roleplay lore, feel free to check out the Wiki:

Wiki

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub:

New Player Hub

Link to comment
Share on other sites

h8wFuWj.png

 

Unfortunately, your application has been denied. Your 48 hour editing period has passed. However, you are more than welcome to immediately reapply, just remember to edit and change everything listed below:

 

- Your Metagaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- When talking about your character’s actions, remember to use 3rd person.

 

- Please remove the topic of slavery from your application.

 

If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance: 

Discord 

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub: 

New Player Hub 

Link to comment
Share on other sites


  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    No registered users viewing this page.

×
×
  • Create New...