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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: tsumuri#3062
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I just try to avoid such players and ignore them, because they ruin the whole experience of rp
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It makes some decisions unfair cause a player would know what he can’t know and can abuse this knowledge, thus destroying the atmosphere and experience for everyone
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Fearendil
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 30
Physical Description: Fearendil is a High Elf. He is tall and fair-skinned. He has light blonde hair and bright blue eyes. He wears a green suit with brown equipment.
Roleplay Scenario:

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”
 

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You slowly rub your head in attempt to remember somethibg. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until you start your story. "My name is Fealendil, I come from the land Haelun'or. My family and I were considered pure enought to stay near the capital. My father is a pureblood elf while my mother is a halfblood so I'm mostly a pureblood elf. My old man was a merchant, he even had a store in the capital so we were relatively wealthy. We had enough money to hire me a master who tought me how to fight with a sword, shoot with a bow and even some basic tactics. I studied with him for 10 years since I was 10 and until I became 20. Even though we had a happy life I was bored. I wanted to go on an adventure" You stop for a second to catch a breath and then continue "When I became 25 I packed my things, my sword and my bow which wwere gifted to me by my master and left my home behind. I spent five years exploring Haelun'or travelling across it. I met a lot of good people on my way. However, problems started when I decided to cross the border and visit other countries. As soon as I left our land a group of bandits ambushed me. I fought them back and was able to run away but my wounds were to sreious. So as soon as I foun a suitable spot to rest I passed out" You looked woman straight into the eyes and after a little hesitation finished "That's the last thing I remember, after that everything is blank and now I'm here. Actually, where am I?" The confusion was visible in your eyes as yuou asked the woman.

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!


 

-Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo


-Please change your character's actions to 3rd person.

Please make these changes within 48 hours!
Once you have made the changes, message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or on the forums @MockingbirdArt

Feel free to reach out if you need help!

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

-Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo


-Please change your character's actions to 3rd person.



If you need help or have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or the forums @MockingbirdArt.

 

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord

 

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"

 

Here are some Links to also help you out!
 

WIKI

New Player Hub.

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