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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Haven't roleplayed before.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It doesn't...?
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Garran Volbrand
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Height - 6,2
Weight - 240
Skin - Rough, Calloused
Outfit - Blacksmith Apron, Scorched Leather, Iron Armor
Eyes - Glowing Amber
Hair - Long, Black
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

 

Garran Volbrand ducks beneath the ragged flap of the tent, his boots squelching in the damp earth as he steps inside. The scent of wax and smoke mingles with the rot outside, but he says nothing. The candles flicker, casting molten light across the deep creases of his face.

He stares at the hag in silence for a moment, then lowers himself onto the cushion with a grunt—his iron-clad weight settling like stone.*

“…My story?”

His voice rumbles low, like coal cracking in flame.

“I was born in shadow… not the kind cast by trees or walls—but the shadow of the world itself. Deep, where no breeze stirs and no sun touches. I was a smith’s son. My father taught me the language of fire. My mother… was silence.”

He pauses, eyes distant.

“I shaped gold and iron into blades for men I would never meet, and in turn, the forge shaped me. Years passed, the same heat, the same hammer. Until the earth above quaked, and something—someone—called me upward.”

He leans forward, the glow in his eyes steady.

“I don’t know your name, hag, nor what you see in me. But I’ve walked out of the fire for a reason. If you know what it is… now’s the time to speak it.”

His hand rests on a worn hammer at his hip—not threatening, but ready. Always ready.

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Greetings, applicant! As you can see, your app is now pending. This means we just need a few changes before it can be accepted!

 

Changes required:

- Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming and Metagaming, as your responses are not quite right. Try and make sure you include an example in your response. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a Community Member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

- Your physical description states your character's eyes are 'glowing'; please remove this, as humans do not have glowing eyes. In addition your skin does not match your chosen eye colour of amber; please update your skin to reflect your character's physical description!

 

- Part of your roleplay scenario seems to be AI-written; please refrain from using such tools for writing your application.

You have 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done, please contact me!

My Discord is _leonie  If you don’t have Discord, feel free to message me on the forums @Bardmancer

You can join the LotC Discord here! Discord

If stuck or confused, go to the Help channel in the New player’s category and ping @Community to request assistance!

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Greetings, applicant! As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.
 

- Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming and Metagaming, as your responses are not quite right. Try and make sure you include an example in your response. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a Community Member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

 

- Your physical description states your character's eyes are 'glowing'; please remove this, as humans do not have glowing eyes. In addition your skin does not match your chosen eye colour of amber; please update your skin to reflect your character's physical description!

 

- Part of your roleplay scenario seems to be AI-written; please refrain from using such tools for writing your application.

 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My Discord is _leonie  If you don’t have Discord, feel free to message me on the forums @Bardmancer

You can join the LotC Discord here! Discord

If stuck or confused, go to the Help channel in the New player’s category and ping @Community to request assistance!

Check out our Wiki; it holds many answers! WIKI

We have a helpful page you can find here! New Player Hub

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