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Tungstus
  • Rules: Yes
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Meta Gaming is talking about IC knowledge in OOC chat, or Vica-Versa
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Power gaming is forcing your actions on other players or creating something too overpowered.
    Status: Denied

Zenodoc grew up in a wealthy family, his mother and father both had well established jobs in their village. Zenodocs father was a blacksmith, while his mother an alchemist. Zenodoc was birthed at home with his mother and father raising him. At the age of 5, Zenodocs mothers and father sent him away to be schooled privately at an academy. Here Zenodoc learnt the many wonders of the world, from geography, to history, mathematics, Elvish Languages and many other skills. Zenodoc Graduated from the Academy when he turned 18, from here he visited his home where his mother and father had grown old and weak., this angered Zenodoc as he felt like he had wasted many years, which he could of spent looking after his family. Zenodoc went into his old room that night and laid upon his bed, his mother kissed his head goodnight and he closed his eyes. He dreamt that night, a dream that would change his life forever.

 

Zenodoc slipped into a deep slumber, he dreamt of forests burning. Animals decomposing, Brick crumbling... Shadows moved quickly, slaying everything in their path leaving only wasteland behind them. In the centre of the mass of shadows there was an orange glow. He waded through the shadows and found an orange glowing orb. He reached out to touch it. Upon touching it his flesh melted. Screams of agony and whispers of darkness. He had sensed true evil. The dream then flicked to a place he had seen before... Deep in the forest. An obelisk... 

 

Zenodoc woke up to his mother and father shaking him, he woke up in a panicked hot sweat. Zenodoc told his parent of the dream and they thought nothing, “Just a nightmare” … However, Zenodoc couldn’t shake the feeling that something in that dream was real. The place... Where had he seen it. Zenodoc snuck out of his home town that night, taking his robe, his old wooden staff and his backpack, full of Academy literature. He sought to find the source of this nightmare. The obelisk. He knows it holds great power.

 

Years later Zenodoc has a hut set up in the woods, still attempting to locate this obelisk.


Character Name: Zenodoc Grarn
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Human, Male, 5'11, Slim, Green Eyes, Black Hair, Black Beard, Long Sapphire Blue Robes, Engraved Wooden Staff
Roleplay Scenario:

**Zenodoc throws back his cowl, revealing his face. He had a warm expression, happy to be greeted in such a manner**

Greetings. I come here seeking Knowledge. That is all. Could you direct me to your nearest library?

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  • Your Character Biography needs to include at minimum one lore reference, to solidify the character backing 

  • Your Meta-Gaming definition should be a bit more clear and a bit broader. 


 

The overall look of your application has good backing to it and is also fairly well put together, I like what it provides so far. I feel that it could just be a bit more personal than what it has so far! You have a 24-hour period to fix anything that was listed above, if you need more time, feel free to let me know. You should note that you aren’t allowed to start with any alchemy knowledge in the server but feel free to pursue it once you are accepted and have made any changes to the application

 

Our server wiki page has a large number of resources that you can utilize to fill out the backstory you can provide us your character! Feel free to join our New Player Discord and chat with Community staff with any questions that you have!

 

If you have any personal questions you’d like to ask me, feel free to pm me on discord: Damo#2886 

 

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