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Tyrael242

By Tyrael242

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Tyrael#6060
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using some out of character info to benefit myself.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Forcing someone to do something without any roll or activity. For example: /me Throws the cart to the villager in front of him/her.
    Status: Denied

When she was born in a small village close by Fenn, her father was a mercenary and her mother was an house wife. When she grow up a little bit, she saw his father using shortswords and bows. She just fascinated from his father. And in childhood of hers, she always wanted to be like his father. So she decided to learn some of the combat arts from her dad. When she was a child, she was trained by some of the guardsmen. She was trained mostly with bows but she still knows how to use a shortsword pretty decent. After spending some time in the village she decided to leave to explore the other kingdoms beacuse she likes to experience new stuff. She knows how to read and write beacuse of her mother teaching them to her when she was super-duper small. She now wanders alone by herself. 

Character Name: Aelua Carlynn
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 61
Physical Description: Milky white hair, blue eyes, standing at 5.6ft, has an oval face, has an average body like an every single elf and has on her right eye.
Roleplay Scenario:

“I came here to see new things actually... I don’t have anything much to say about it. Now please! I just want to see what’s inside!”

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to too many errors, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • In your bio, you state that your character has received some rather extensive training. I would recommend curbing this a bit, as it could be viewed as powergaming to already be a skilled warrior even before you start. 
  • In your Personality traits you state your character is skilled with a bow. Please do not include this in her personality traits, as it is not a part of her personality. 
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • Snow elves skin tends to be very pale, and not lilac as you have it. Please fix this. 
  • Your Physical traits are unclear at the end and need to be rewritten.

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @LordScisso#5640, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/

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