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    Referral: topg.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When you refer to a game inside a game.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Forcing another player to do something.
    Status: Denied

Elwin Iliren was born in the kingdom of Rivendell. His father was named Ailwin Iliren, and his mother was named Tolia Iliren. Upon his birth Elwin's Mother was very ill, and died only a few minutes after giving birth to him. Even with the great medicine of the elves she couldn't be saved. Elwin was raised by his father alone in the field in combat. At the age of nine he was taught the way of the sword and when he was twelve the way of the bow. Elwin preferred the bow for he was naturally gifted with accuracy, a trait he obtained with his father. He spent fifteen years training with a sword and twenty-four with a bow and arrow. Elwin was living a peaceful life in Rivendell, and had to occasionally fight to protect his kingdom from orcs, and one day he was faced with a brutal force of orcs sent directly from Mordor. It was a battle of 2000 orcs and over 10000 elves, but when the smoke cleared, Elwin had noticed he was next to the body of his father. From that day forth Elwin vowed to never let any of his loved ones be harmed again. He stayed in Rivendell for over 300 years, until his 400th birthday, when he decided to leave his kingdom behind, and find a life of his own in the world of Middle Earth.

Character Name: Elwin Iliren
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 655
Physical Description: Silver hair, pale skin, hairless other than head, elegant, pointy ears, 6 foot 9.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your application has been:

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You only have to make a couple changes to your application! Unfortunately, since you are a guest account, I have to instantly deny your application if any changes need to be made. Guests cannot edit their applications, so there is no way for you to make the needed changes without making another application. If you make a forum account, though, you may edit your application and make the changes listed below.

-Firstly, although your biography is quite good, please make sure to use lore that references our server. We do not share lore with Lord of The Rings, although we do take great inspiration from it. You can view most of our lore on our wiki, which is here: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

-Secondly, your metagaming definition is incorrect. You will need to fix this if you wish to be accepted.

-Unfortunately, high elves cannot be over 6'6".

 

If you need any assistance making these changes, don't hesitate to send me a message on the forums! You can also join our new player discord, which is full of players who would be more than happy to assist you. https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 

You may reapply in six hours. Don't hesitate to ask for any help if needed!

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