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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: quandale_dingle_23#1687
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: By playing fair
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It ruins the whole point of roleplay
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))
They are all looking for me since I escaped to freedom I come here to hopefully one day be strong enough to return to what was once home


Character Name: Haydawg II
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 6 foot, athletic build, black hair, stubble beard, 150 lbs, blue eyes, jacket and pants, white
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has been set to Pending for now, as we found some areas that need revising.

Don’t worry though - once your changes are made, you’ll be back on track to roleplaying with us in no time.

 

- Your Powergaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

- Your Metagaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences. If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.


- Please remember to include backstory in the Backstory & Roleplay Scenario, even if your persona doesn’t verbally talk about it.

 

- Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks.

 

- Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario.

 

- Please note that you can’t use the default skin’s face for the server, but the outfits are fine. If you need help editing the head please reach out. You can also take a look at our server’s skin skin archive:

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

You have 48 hours to make these changes.

Once your changes are complete, please reach out to me on the forums @Amayonnaise. You can also click on my name here to find my profile.

 

 If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance:

Discord

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions, or to receive help from other players with your pending application.

 

If you need more ideas, or to research more roleplay lore, feel free to check out the Wiki:

Wiki

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub:

New Player Hub

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied. Your 48 hour editing period has passed. However, you are more than welcome to immediately reapply, just remember to edit and change everything listed below:

 

- Your Powergaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

- Your Metagaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences. If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.


- Please remember to include backstory in the Backstory & Roleplay Scenario, even if your persona doesn’t verbally talk about it.

 

- Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks.

 

- Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario.

 

- Please note that you can’t use the default skin’s face for the server, but the outfits are fine. If you need help editing the head please reach out. You can also take a look at our server’s skin skin archive:

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance: 

Discord 

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub: 

New Player Hub

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