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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: As easy as it can be to get carried away in some scenarios it's always necessary to remain considerate of others and their unique RP experiences so that you don't ruin the fun for them and/or break their immersion.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Metagaming breaks immersion and solely benefits the individual engaging in it and can often unfairly affect other players (i.e. a player abusing metagaming gains an upper hand on another individual in some way, whether it be competitively, financially, etc).
    There can be a fair amount of nuance when it comes to what does and doesn't constitute as 'metagaming' to some folks, it never hurts to pause for a moment and consider whether or not an initially fair decision may actually be influenced in some way by information that was unfairly obtained.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example: I take a seat slowly and with caution, not breaking my gaze with the old woman.

 

"I'm.. really not sure how you recognize me, I'm almost afraid to ask. If you really don't know my story, then let me begin by telling you that it is one of many mistakes."

 

The woman gestures to continue

 

"Right, so. How do I break this down for you. Six or seven months ago, I found myself wrapped up in some shady business in a huge port town way South of here. I'll hold off on the name for now. Now I'm not one to get mixed up in bad business, really - it's not in my blood. But I needed the scratch badly. You try making an honest living in a fishing town as a professionally educated redstone engineer! My expertise wasn't appreciated nor my skills required... beggars on the street were bringing in more than me in a week. I probably should have listened to my folks when they told me it was a risky career path. What was I getting to? Right. I stepped on a few toes, forgot about a few debts that I owed, yadda yadda, I ended up having to skip town - with a small hunting party close behind. Now, the real trouble only really began when I dispatched the first handful that came after my head. Interesting thing about fisherman that do crime for a living, they're not the brightest - redstone traps, it's like dark magic to them, you see... My actions were questionable in hindsight and jacked up my bounty pretty high. Raised a few eyebrows. So to be perfectly frank with you, I'm on the run in search of a place to dig my heels in and begin a new life from scratch. I'm a wanted man, lady."


Character Name: Sylvanius
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 27
Physical Description: Short unkempt brown hair, clean shaven, brown eyes, likes suspenders because belts feel weird to them.
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Please make the following changes in the next 48 hours:

  • Please add a few more actions for your character in your backstory. It can be very simple things like denoting expression. Make sure to do it in third person.

 

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Changed Status to Denied

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • Please add a few more actions for your character in your backstory. It can be very simple things like denoting expression. Make sure to do it in third person.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

If you have any specific questions, please feel free to message me on discord:

Orlanth#3080

If you need general help,  you can join the LotC Discord here:

 https://discord.gg/lotc

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki:

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

For additional help, here is a link to the new player hub:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/212839-new-player-hub

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